Copy template
Hacker News technical proof post template
Show enough implementation proof in a launch post that technical readers trust the product is real and worth critiquing.
Example
“The first version watches competitor changelogs and release feeds, clusters similar changes, and sends one weekly summary instead of another dashboard. The hard part was suppressing noisy updates without hiding pricing or packaging changes.”
Copy structure
- Open with the narrow workflow and why existing approaches felt broken.
- Describe the smallest working system you built in plain technical language.
- Name two implementation constraints or tradeoffs that shaped the product.
- Show one result, screenshot, benchmark, example output, or live demo path.
- Ask readers to challenge the weakest technical or workflow assumption.
Reusable prompt
Turn {product} into a Show HN technical proof post. Include the narrow workflow, what was built, two implementation constraints, one inspectable proof artifact, and one question that asks technical readers to challenge the riskiest assumption.
Commercialization notes
Buyer outcome
A founder can explain the technical substance behind a launch clearly enough to attract useful Hacker News comments instead of generic marketing criticism.
Paid-pack fit
Useful in a paid pack because technical founders often know what they built but struggle to compress proof, constraints, and asks into a readable launch post.
Implementation checklist
- List all inspectable proof artifacts before writing the copy.
- Choose two constraints that make the product feel focused rather than overbuilt.
- Remove implementation details that do not help readers judge the workflow or trust the demo.
Export format: Technical proof paragraph outline plus artifact checklist
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